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HERE IS A SNIPPET FROM MY NEXT NOVEL, EVERMORE.

“You didn’t have to do that,” Avery said.

“What?” Emeline opened the water, ready to pass it to him.

He turned, finally giving her his fully attention from his crouched position. Flames danced across his skin, turning him into a molten god. “Serve me. You’re not working and I’m not a customer” he said with a scowl.

His words slapped her. “You asshole. I would feed anyone who came to my home. It’s call common courtesy. Having manners which you have none.”

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2 thoughts on “

  1. Nice! The dialogue feels so real. 🙂 I like that she’s feisty enough to tell him like it is. Good 8!

    Tmonique, on the linky list host site, I just changed the url you signed up with to the url for this page. That might be the reason that only SJ commented on your post–the others couldn’t find you when they clicked on the link. Before I changed it, clicking on it brought participants to the wrong page on this site.

    I hope you’ll continue participating, and if you sign up with the exact page link of your post, others can find you and comment. 🙂

    Have a great week… 🙂 ~T~

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