Hope you enjoy this sample of Eternity
Nowhere to hide in the studio apartment, she went into the bathroom and tried not to cry, to’ suck it up’ and bury the misery rolling deep in her chest. The façade worked when her Mother died and when her Father remarried, and then died. Foster care, Mrs. Carmen and the attack, Stella had become an expert at hiding her pain, smiling through the tears.
Not this time.
This time the tears came along with wrenching sobs and despair so intense she slid to the floor and curled into a fetal position.
Roman.
Great six makes me want to read more. I would love it if you could comment on mines. Thanks!
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You can really feel her pain. Makes me wonder what’s happened that’s worse than the other terrible things she’s been through. Nice snippet.
Wonderful excerpt.
Wonderful six, her pain comes through